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tamlin_kitsune) wrote2010-02-10 06:05 pm
tamlin_kitsune) wrote2010-02-10 06:05 pm
avatar help?
okay - group huddle. Since most everyone I'm hooked up with here is either an author and/or a reader/reviewer that I respect I need some opinions (okay, I need LOTS of opinions).
Is Cloud out of character in avatar?
granted, I know he's not 'really' Cloud and he's playing the role a bit *cough*lots*cough* more aggressively than I should probably make him but, especially in chapter 2, is his core 'Cloud' or not? I need some solid assessment - pros, cons, stuff like that? And, if he's horribly off, is it something fixable or should I scrap and start over? I know there's not much at this point to go on because he's playing things close to the vest - I guess what I'm asking is - does he feel right (as silly as that may sound)? If I put a different name on him, would he still be recognizably Cloud?
Is Cloud out of character in avatar?
granted, I know he's not 'really' Cloud and he's playing the role a bit *cough*lots*cough* more aggressively than I should probably make him but, especially in chapter 2, is his core 'Cloud' or not? I need some solid assessment - pros, cons, stuff like that? And, if he's horribly off, is it something fixable or should I scrap and start over? I know there's not much at this point to go on because he's playing things close to the vest - I guess what I'm asking is - does he feel right (as silly as that may sound)? If I put a different name on him, would he still be recognizably Cloud?