heh - I'll admit, I'm kind of wondering why none such has shown up in my cloti stuff as well - now. lol
and, I like to think the first chapter at least is entirely understandable (and hopefully enjoyable) without any knowledge of the Naruto universe. If you do read it, you'll have to let me know. And let me know how I managed to sneak kink in there too - because I have NO idea!
then again - should I blame it on the characters themselves? Or more to the point, Minato?
preview from chapter 14 goes something like:
She squirmed again in protest and he locked his arms down across her body in hard bands and spread his fingers wide to press them into her.
“Little fox,” his voice was very soft. “If you keep moving like that I am going to find us a bed of grass out of the children’s hearing range and I’m not going to stop until I know every inch of your body from familiar repetition and you've lost the ability to make noise anymore.”
Possibly for the first time in their acquaintance, she went absolutely frozen and still. He couldn’t see her eyes – but he was willing to bet they were huge and unblinking. Despite himself, it shifted the edges of his lips upward. After a minute more, her voice, with a little bit of a squeak to it, asked cautiously:
“Really?”
“Really.”
There was another long pause in which she didn’t move. After a minute, curious, her voice, muffled against his chest, asked:
I blame Minato!
Date: 2009-12-01 06:22 am (UTC)and, I like to think the first chapter at least is entirely understandable (and hopefully enjoyable) without any knowledge of the Naruto universe. If you do read it, you'll have to let me know. And let me know how I managed to sneak kink in there too - because I have NO idea!
then again - should I blame it on the characters themselves? Or more to the point, Minato?
preview from chapter 14 goes something like:
She squirmed again in protest and he locked his arms down across her body in hard bands and spread his fingers wide to press them into her.
“Little fox,” his voice was very soft. “If you keep moving like that I am going to find us a bed of grass out of the children’s hearing range and I’m not going to stop until I know every inch of your body from familiar repetition and you've lost the ability to make noise anymore.”
Possibly for the first time in their acquaintance, she went absolutely frozen and still. He couldn’t see her eyes – but he was willing to bet they were huge and unblinking. Despite himself, it shifted the edges of his lips upward. After a minute more, her voice, with a little bit of a squeak to it, asked cautiously:
“Really?”
“Really.”
There was another long pause in which she didn’t move. After a minute, curious, her voice, muffled against his chest, asked:
“Would I enjoy it?”
“Yes. A great deal.”